Reminiscent of Ali Smith’s brilliant novel “Autumn,” Hughes’s prose is like a virtuosic jazz number — loose, free and surprising. Despite the boundless spirit of the narrative, her authorial command rarely wavers. Occasional digressions emerge in the secondary story lines and the expounding of political and philosophical ideas, but those spokes of thought often connect to the novel’s center, returning to the sisters as they each reconsider their own versions of home and family. At one point, there is a lengthy discussion of Heidegger and the notion that “care is what makes us human. … We’re borne of care, it’s an intractable phenomenon of being, our central way of understanding the self.” What is the difference between “taking care of” and “caring for”? And how do these beliefs apply to Olwen and her longing to disappear?
Midway through, Hughes introduces a two-act-play structure. Admittedly, that shift requires a bit more from the reader, but within a few pages, she seduced me with her clever narrative strategy and its ability to amplify the distinct voices of these sisters. Instead of distracting from the main narrative, this structural choice energizes — and deepens — the characters.
Perhaps Hughes is pointing to the influence of the great Irish dramatists, such as J.M. Synge, Brendan Behan and, more recently, Tom Murphy, who hailed from her hometown of Galway and was known for the musicality of his language, his dark humor and the demands of his plays on actors and audiences. I also found myself thinking about the novelistic stage directions found in Eugene O’Neill’s work, reflecting his lyrical voice as much as the precision and rigor of his instructions.
Despite the grief, loneliness and isolation threaded throughout, “The Alternatives” is also a funny novel. Wit and humor percolate, like a simmering pot, throughout the scenes. On the sentence level, rhythm and cadence propel Hughes’s effortless prose. In one of the stage directions during a pub scene, the author writes of Nell and then Maeve: “Her body lifts and resettles, as if resetting the needle on the vinyl after a scratch. They are both put in mind of their father — his passion for company and chaos, his overspill of love, his need for a teeming house, loud with chatter. It was his idea, surely, to treat postpartum with more children. To treat aloneness with company.”
